A BUSINESS LETTER
In this activity, students attempt to re-write an inappropriately informal business letter in a more appropriate, formal style.
They then compare their version with a model text, helping them to notice the conventional formulae used in this type of letter, and incorporate some of this new language into another similar letter.
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ACTIVITY FROM READING 2 : “Fine Foods Ltd. Letter” (Workshhet 2)
I.- Select the best alternative according to the reading
1.- What is the purpose of J. Brown’s letter to R. Jones?
- a) To request information about a stock control system
- b) To clarify some points about the stock control system
- c) To cancel an order
- d) To renegotiate a contract
2.- What specific points does J. Brown want to clarify about the stock control system?
- a) The price and installation
- b) The discount on future upgrades and the implementation period
- c) The compatibility with other systems
- d) The training for employees
3.- What is the implementation period for the stock control system mentioned in R. Jones’ letter?
- a) 1 week
- b) 3 weeks
- c) 2 months
- d) Not mentioned
4.- What does J. Brown request at the end of the letter?
- a) A demonstration of the system
- b) A discount on the price
- c) A swift response to her queries
- d) Cancellation of the order
5.- What is J. Brown’s position at Fine Foods Ltd.?
- a) Sales Manager
- b) Purchasing Manager
- c) Human Resources Manager
- d) Finance Manager
6.- What is the address of Fine Foods Ltd.?
- a) 10 Bridge Street, London SW10 5TG
- b) River Buildings, Stockwell Walk, London SW17 5HG
- c) 10 Bridge Street, London SW17 5HG
- d) River Buildings, Stockwell Walk, London SW10 5TG
7.- What system is being considered by Fine Foods Ltd.?
- a) Human Resource Management System
- b) Stock Control System
- c) Customer Relationship Management System
- d) Accounting System
8.- When did J. Brown receive R. Jones’ letter?
- a) 1 September 2006
- b) 12 September 2006
- c) The letter does not mention the date of receipt
- d) 10 September 2006
9.- What does J. Brown request regarding future system updates?
- a) A discount on the upgrade price
- b) Free access to future updates
- c) Additional training for employees
- d) Priority technical support
10.- How does J. Brown close the letter?
- a) Sincerely
- b) Best regards
- c) Cordially
- d) Greetings
2.– Fill-in-the-Blank Exercises
- Fine Foods Ltd. is considering implementing a _______________ system.
- The stock control system has been recently _______________.
- J. Brown requests a _______________ response to her questions.
- The system implementation period is _______________ weeks.
- J. Brown is the _______________ of Fine Foods Ltd.
3.– True or False Exercise
- _____ Fine Foods Ltd. has placed a formal order for the stock control system.
- _____ J. Brown is satisfied with the system implementation period.
- ______Thames Software Systems is located in London.
- ______ J. Brown requests a system demonstration.
- ______J. Brown’s letter is a response to R. Jones’ letter.
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